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please devil take my soul im just an empty vessile taking my taul in the time the time it took me to right this peom i could off just made my own forum im sick of this life all i get into is strife i might as well end it with a knife! please devil take my soul please devil hear my call please devil this is all u asked my for now take my soul and never ever take my moral
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take my soul
deathkeeper
- Posts : 7
Join date : 2010-10-20
Pinkbutterflies- Posts : 6
Join date : 2010-10-18
Location : Western Australia
very gorey hun!!!! Well described
Myth- Posts : 13
Join date : 2010-10-14
Location : Home Alone
Dark, yet a very genuine feel. I think with your ability to freely express such powerful emotions and little fine tuning to your style you will truly shine in the writer's community...
Enjoyed
~M~
Enjoyed
~M~
Harklight
- Posts : 77
Join date : 2010-10-13
Very chilling, realistic writing, Chris. Be yourself, mate, and please keep writing.
Big hugs from me. H x
Big hugs from me. H x
Jamie- Posts : 74
Join date : 2010-10-12
There is so much raw pain coming from this write that it echoes in my heart. I do think that final note of never take my moral (morale?) is a bit of hope that lifts the write nicely at the end. Thank you for sharing with us!