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    deathkeeper


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    Post by deathkeeper on Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:16 am

    C is for charming, love so sencere
    H is for honest,so loved do dear
    R is for rejoice, big hugs to share
    I is for incredible, a treasure so rare
    S is for smile, one of a kind
    T is for true, a treasure to find
    O is for outgoing, bright as a star
    P is for precious, the best by far
    H is for handsom, a wonderful creation
    E is for exceptional, you are number one
    R is for radiant a delight to know christopher you are a joy you bestow
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    Pinkbutterflies


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    Post by Pinkbutterflies on Wed Oct 20, 2010 7:44 am

    Brilliant baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Jamie


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    Post by Jamie on Wed Oct 20, 2010 9:15 pm

    This is delightful! I love acrostics--some people find them hard but I agree with Augustus that they're quite fun! I love how you kept the rhyme going even with an odd-numbered line to work with at the end. Clever write, full of optimism and I think it sounds like a Blessing. Well done!
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    Harklight


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    Post by Harklight on Wed Oct 20, 2010 11:35 pm

    Lol, I love this!!! You've written wonderfully, showing real personality. Kudos for the fun in this acrostic. It's as radiant as you shine and you are a joy to know. Smile H x

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