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    cjenks



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    Post by cjenks Mon Jan 10, 2011 9:36 am

    Panorama

    Sitting by a lake, watching the snow covered mountain framed by the blue sky
    In the still, clear lake was the panoramic reflection; there inverted lie.
    I was wondering if the clear lake reflected the blue sky and the mountain high
    Or if the panorama was the inverted projection of the image on the lake nigh.
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    Post by Harklight Wed Jan 12, 2011 6:35 pm

    Very profound musings, Chris. Your images are strong and I like this rhyme scheme and format for the poem. Now, I'll ponder all day - lol. Good work, H x
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    Post by Jamie Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:23 am

    Love the twist of perspective here; usually nature poetry is simply observant and fails to ask such questions. I'm partial to well-rhymed poetry, too, so this was a double treat for me. Smile

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