loveeee

im bound from love through day and night and i am afread of what might im so scarred of what will happen im just afread of what can be mistakem i dont need love i dont need faith but when it comes to the end i still dont have a date i dont want love i just want might to stand up for what is right,
love is true love is great its also so much like a milky way in the senter is something soft and sensere but on the out side there is a concoction of something mean and cruel but in the end it is worth it for her truth

<3 death knight

That's lovely sweetie....You've got the poets bug now...Keep reading, writing and learning...Loving your stuff....xx

I really enjoyed the depths of tones in this write, Chris. It also has a good moral.
Your rhythm suits stanzas for free form poetry. I'm happy to help with format,
punctuation and using spell-checker. I'll send you a PM.
It's wonderful that you used the "Milky Way" metaphor in this second part.
Keep reading poetry, learning and writing. I'll read more from you. H x